This learning outcome is taking the time to look at a rough draft and see the whole image and the approach that one can take to make the essay flow better. Its looking at the global changes. When I initially took this class I never looked at the global changes of my writing because I always felt that once I wrote the paragraphs it was set where they were. This past essay that I wrote was the first time that I actually to rewrite my whole opening paragraph as well as the body paragraphs. I did all of this to help further my argument. The following photos show the draft introduction as well as the final introduction and the changes I made. The changes that I made was actually rewriting the whole intro because I felt that it didn’t get my argument across. When I started taking ENG 122 I never really took the time to fix the different global changes that really have an effect on the greater of my paper. This really had a connection with my ability to give peer-review as well. It was all a learning curve as well as growing in my ability to be confident with my writing. ENG 123 I really started to push myself in trying in new ways of changing the way I write as well as how I revise my writing. Even on my end of semester writing prompt I took the time to fix the global changes that needed to be made as well as build on my argument.