MY BEST ADVICE:
WHY THIS IS MY BEST ADIVCE:
I personally feel that this is some of my best advice. This is because I do offer that it was a strong start and just give advice on aspects that he could improve upon. With peer reviews its important to not come across as rude but more helpful.
BEST ADVICE FROM MY PEERS:
WHY ITS THEIR BEST ADVICE:
I personally found this very helpful because it helped me build on my own aspects of the speech. With that advice I was able to expand on my travels and give insight to why my passport was so important. It was also deeper then just eye contact or fixing common words it allowed me to build on my own work. He offered ideas.
MY BIGGEST STRIDES:
I personally felt that within the first 30 seconds of both videos it becomes clear that I am more comfortable with the topic. One of the tell tails between both videos is through how many times I say the word “like”. Even with practice I am able to focus on the concepts that I am getting across. The big shift that pushed me to get there was through writing myself notes when working on the outline. Through out my videos it becomes clear that I turn to hand motions when I need to allow my brain to catch up with my mouth and in the final of this speech I don’t lean on the hand motions as a crutch as much as I had starting this class.
SECRETS TO MY SUCCESS: