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Month: April 2017

Newcomer Discourse Final

Newcomer Discourse Final

As one of the fastest growing college sport, women’s lacrosse is still not very well known.  Also, women’s lacrosse even has a higher growth rate than men’s. Lacrosse is the type of sport that is very distinct and can be very confusing for most.  This discourse has many different distinctions that make it so different from even men’s lacrosse.  For example, women’s lacrosse is a non contact sport, whereas men’s lacrosse is full body contact.  Women’s lacrosse as a sport…

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Rough Draft Newcomer Discourse

Rough Draft Newcomer Discourse

As one of the fastest growing college sport women’s lacrosse is still not very well known.  Also women’s lacrosse even has a higher growth rate than men’s. Lacrosse is the type of sport that is very distinct and can be very confusing for most.  This discourse has many different distinctions that make it so different from even men’s lacrosse.  For example, women’s lacrosse is a non contact sport, whereas men’s lacrosse is full body contact.  Our sport is more about…

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Error Patterns

Error Patterns

One of my largest errors was the sentence fragments. When writing a rough draft I struggle with the concept of finishing the sentence before moving on to the next idea.

Lacrosse Discourse Added Conclusions

Lacrosse Discourse Added Conclusions

Lacrosse is the type of sport that is very distinct and can be very confusing for most.  This discourse has many different distinctions that makes it so different from even men’s lacrosse.  For example, women’s lacrosse is a non contact sport. Whereas men’s lacrosse is full body contact.  Our sport is more about the control and beauty. As any other team it helps you build relationships because like a family you have to learn to love each other or else…

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